Saturday, September 10, 2005

the day he fainted

ok,
a little purple here,
and,
maybe a patch of orange there.
definitely the browns here.
what else?
hmmm...
the greens all around should do,
but with different shades.
green, dark green, darker green,
light green, lighter green...
hey, no maroon!
ok, red will do.

then what else?

too many colours...
his eyes can't take it
his breathing went rapid
he can't hear anyone talking

he dropped onto the floor.

fainted.
too many colours.



reader k | 9/10/2005 01:11:00 PM |
4 Comments:
Blogger i am. said...

Didn't he tell you ,it was fake? lol..i think he forgot.

5:31 PM  
Blogger serenah said...

when i saw him, he was white, bound in orange, on black wheels, into a white and a little red ambulance, along with people in grey, yellow, green, black, purple and maybe some pink...but mainly faded..

7:41 PM  
Blogger k said...

i choose to believe every word he says :)

11:21 AM  
Blogger alex said...

I don't really remember the colours, just the floor suddenly cool and grey against my cheek, and thinking it would be good to stay lying there for a while in the cool greyness.

3:36 PM  

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